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@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ Please use:
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 <span class="one">This one</span> goes by traditional "she/her/hers" and "they/them" in a professional setting.</p>
-<p>Be aware though... <span class="name">Rena</span> will likely treat you professionally if you use those; and less like a "friend". <span class="_3pp">It</span> can't help that, you'll need to be fine with that.
+<p>Although... <span class="name">Rena</span> will likely be distant if you use those; and treat you less like a "friend". <span class="_3pp">It</span> may find it difficult, you'll have to understand that.
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 <h2>bonus: how will <span class="name">Rena</span> refer to <span class="_3pp">itself</span>?</h2>
@@ -141,5 +141,5 @@ Very carefully! <span class="_3pp">It</span> will usually speak as if <span clas
   <span class="name">Rena</span> may use the royal "we" or "us" to refer to <span class="_3pp">itself</span> as stand-in for first-person singular pronouns. <span class="_3pp">It</span> often speaks as such in a plural sense, meaning collectively with headmates too; but sometimes not~
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-<small>Special thanks to noe(💜) and it's <a href="https://noe.sh/pronouns/">pronouns page</a> for the layout and reference.</small>
+<small>Special thanks to 41666(💜) and it's <a href="https://noe.sh/pronouns/">pronouns page</a> for the layout and reference.</small>
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